Writer’s Memo (Reflection for the Intro Revision)

Using Kathleen Blake Yancey’s description of revision (projection, retrospection, and revision) read through your first draft of your Introduction and compare it to what you have it in your head that you want your final version to look like (the ideal introduction). In 2 pages reflect on the following questions:

1. In what ways does your first draft resemble the ideal in your head?
2. In what ways does your first draft not resemble the ideal? Why?
3. How did you revise your introduction so that it more closely resembled that ideal?